Archive for September, 2009

Three Things You Should Be Reading If You’re Not

Wednesday, September 30th, 2009

Note I said “you should be reading”, not “you should read”. That’s because “you should be reading” means something special to me: I’m talking comics. A great novel or story is like a meteor: it flares too briefly to watch its passing. Even when there are ongoing series worth reading, like Harry Potter or the Inheritance Cycle, each book is still a flare. The primary written medium in which you can watch a work of fiction blaze a trail of excellence as it goes by is comics.

SO. Here are three things you should be reading if you’re not:

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Batwoman in Detective Comics. For essentially first time in 70 years, Detective Comics is being headlined by someone other than Batman – and by a female lesbian of Jewish descent to boot! But you should be reading the book for more than its stunt value. Greg Rucka’s interesting choices are highlighted by JH Williams III’s solid art and spectacular layouts: for example, when Batwoman’s alter ego, Kate Kane, attends a dance in a tuxedo and is asked to dance by Maggie Sawyer, a lesbian on Gotham’s Major Crimes Unit, Williams draws them dancing through a sea of musical notes, and in those notes inserts tiny mini-panels showing details of the scene that let us know they’re dancing comfortably close, but not yet too close for comfort. Sometimes the panels are overwhelming and on the currently running “Elegy” arc there are a few threads left loose, but the quality of the work is so high I find myself carried along.

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John Byrne’s Star Trek: Crew and its sequels. Featuring Number One, Captain Pike’s first officer from Star Trek’s original pilot the Cage, Star Trek: Crew is what a reboot of Star Trek could have and should have been (and I’m saying that even after I warmed up to The Future Begins). Using only the original series designs, Byrne nonetheless manages to make them exciting by taking them completely seriously. The writing is great, the art is solid and the fan service is enough to stoke a fanboy’s wet dreams. John Byrne has a whole set of forums on his work in Star Trek and I encourage you to check it out.

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Usagi Yojimbo by Stan Sakai … it speaks for itself.

So go check them out.
-the Centaur

The Killer Cookbook of Marie Curie

Monday, September 28th, 2009

Link roundup – file under creepy:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Marie_Curie:
Due to their levels of radioactivity, her papers from the 1890s (and even her cookbook) are considered too dangerous to handle. They are kept in lead-lined boxes; those who wish to consult them must wear protective clothing.

“Verified” at http://www.hypatiamaze.org/m_curie/curie_walk.html.

A Still More Glorious Dawn Awaits

Sunday, September 27th, 2009

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My buddy Gordon tipped me to the song Glorious Dawn by Colorpulse featuring Carl Sagan and Stephen Hawking:

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After so many years since his amazing television show Cosmos, it strikes me how much I like the way he thinks – how he imagines vistas of space and time:

An still more glorious dawn awaits: not a sunrise, but a galaxy rise – a morning filled with four hundred billion suns: the rising of the Milky Way.

How he synthesizes facts about the world:

But the brain does more than just recollect: it intercompares, it synthesizes, it analyzes, it generates abstractions … the brain has its own language for testing the structure and consistency of the world.

How he combines prediction and caution:

The sky calls to us; if we do not destroy ourselves, we will one day venture to the stars.

And most of all, how beautifully he writes:

The surface of the Earth is the shore of the cosmic ocean. Recently, we’ve waded a little way out … and the water seems inviting.

When I grow up, I want to be like Carl. So check the video out on Youtube, go to Colorpulse’s site for more videos, or to Amazon for a copy of Cosmos.

-The Centaur

Back to Blood Rock

Thursday, September 24th, 2009

The Internet.  A huge distraction.   You're writing happily away when suddenly you wonder whether your steampunk heroine ran into Einstein during her trip to Germany and, if so, was he young enough to date her.  Thirty seconds later Wikipedia tells you yes … but thirty minutes later you mysteriously find yourself still researching the priority of relativity controversy.

So: the Internet goes off when I'm writing now, and I collect questions in a text file while I work for later research.  So far, this plan is working well.

Sent from my gPhone.

Answer: Edit Your Subject, or Be Sad

Thursday, September 24th, 2009

As it says in the header.  Less useful for maintaining a threaded of blog posts in Gmail, but there may be ways around that.

-the Centaur

P.S. In reference to this post and this post.

Re: [The Library of Dresan] I forget you can post directly from email…

Thursday, September 24th, 2009

And what happens if you reply?

-the Centaur

I forget you can post directly from email…

Thursday, September 24th, 2009

… let's see how well it works.

-the Centaur

Don’t Try To Critique Dan Brown

Monday, September 21st, 2009

It’s a fun thing in writer’s circles to critique Dan Brown. Let me quote Tom Chivers in the Telegraph, who picked what he thought were 20 of Dan Brown’s worst sentences, highlighting in bold one in particular I’ve heard other writers critique:

4, 3, and 2. The Da Vinci Code, opening sentence: Renowned curator Jacques Saunière staggered through the vaulted archway of the museum’s Grand Gallery.

Angels and Demons, opening sentence: Physicist Leonardo Vetra smelled burning flesh, and he knew it was his own.

Deception Point, opening sentences: Death, in this forsaken place, could come in countless forms. Geologist Charles Brophy had endured the savage splendor of this terrain for years, and yet nothing could prepare him for a fate as barbarous and unnatural as the one about to befall him.

Professor Pullum: “Renowned author Dan Brown staggered through his formulaic opening sentence”.

Professor Pullum, here, is Geoffrey Pullum, “famous” in my small circles for this small essay about why he thinks the first sentence of The Da Vinci Code is so bad:

I am still trying to come up with a fully convincing account of just what it was about his very first sentence, indeed the very first word, that told me instantly that I was in for a very bad time stylistically.

The Da Vinci Code may well be the only novel ever written that begins with the word renowned. Here is the paragraph with which the book opens. The scene (says a dateline under the chapter heading, ‘Prologue’) is the Louvre, late at night:

Renowned curator Jacques Saunière staggered through the vaulted archway of the museum’s Grand Gallery. He lunged for the nearest painting he could see, a Caravaggio. Grabbing the gilded frame, the seventy-six-year-old man heaved the masterpiece toward himself until it tore from the wall and Saunière collapsed backward in a heap beneath the canvas.

I think what enabled the first word to tip me off that I was about to spend a number of hours in the company of one of the worst prose stylists in the history of literature was this. Putting curriculum vitae details into complex modifiers on proper names or definite descriptions is what you do in journalistic stories about deaths; you just don’t do it in describing an event in a narrative. So this might be reasonable text for the opening of a newspaper report the next day:

Renowned curator Jacques Saunière died last night in the Louvre at the age of 76.

But Brown packs such details into the first two words of an action sequence — details of not only his protagonist’s profession but also his prestige in the field. It doesn’t work here. It has the ring of utter ineptitude. The details have no relevance, of course, to what is being narrated (Saunière is fleeing an attacker and pulls down the painting to trigger the alarm system and the security gates). We could have deduced that he would be fairly well known in the museum trade from the fact that he was curating at the Louvre.

If you agree with this assessment of Dan Brown’s work, you might as well stop reading, because you’ve completely missed the point of what Dan Brown is doing. In fact, the key to what’s wrongheaded about The Telegraph’s list and Pullum’s critique is contained in the very first sentence I quoted by Pullum:

I am still trying to come up with a fully convincing account of just what it was about his very first sentence, indeed the very first word, that told me instantly that I was in for a very bad time stylistically.

He’s struggling to come up with that convincing account because the very first sentence of the Da Vinci Code wasn’t bad. In fact, Pullum’s critique inadvertently nails precisely what’s great about the opening sentence: it incorporates newspaper style details like the “renowned” status of the curator and his advanced age even into its action sequences, effortlessly, as a way of grounding us in otherwise fantastic action.

At the end of this opening sentence, you not only know an old man is running for his life, you know he’s very, very old, respected to the point of being famous, and knows the paintings on the wall so well he mentally categorizes them by artist, even if you personally have no idea who Caravaggio is. And by weaving massive amounts of detail through even the action sequences of the story, Dan Brown establishes an authoritative air which provides the necessary grounding for his fantastic tale of a secret Christian history.

The Da Vinci Code is a great book that attracted millions of readers by sucking them into a great detective story that seemed almost real – and the stylistic elements Pullum critiques above are precisely what enable readers to make that mental shift. I’m not sure why Pullum reacted the way he did, but I strongly suspect that he simply doesn’t enjoy pure escapist literature – which is his right – but failed to recognize that was the reason behind his dislike and confabulated these erroneous rationalizations to justify that dislike – as the human mind so often does.

Similarly, both the Telegraph list and some critiques I’ve heard in writing groups sound like the blind application of writing workshop rules. But “rules” like “show, don’t tell” aren’t hard and fast rules; they are guidelines designed to help authors, and moreover guidelines whose importance changes as writing styles change. And if you read widely and deep, you’ll find that a vast number of “great authors” and “classic works” violate each and every rule you can find in a writing workshop – or repeat many of the sins Pullum and Chivers outline above.

The Da Vinci Code is ridiculous escapist nonsense. But that nonsense is anchored by a fantastic-in-every-sense-of-the-word idea and grounded by what to an average person would seem like an immense amount of erudition. Brown’s research will not satisfy experts in an area, and it still is escapist nonsense – but it is immensely well crafted escapist nonsense. If what The Da Vinci Code is is not your bag, then just say “I don’t like The Da Vinci Code, because it took itself entirely too seriously for a bit of escapist nonsense” and leave it at that; don’t feel the need to impugn Dan Brown’s talent.

To finish, let me quote Chivers #1 bad sentence:

1. The Da Vinci Code: Title. The Da Vinci Code.

Leonardo’s surname was not Da Vinci. He was from Vinci, or of Vinci. As many critics have pointed out, calling it The Da Vinci Code is like saying Mr Of Arabia or asking What Would Of Nazareth Do?

This analysis is so bad, I’ll just let it speak for itself. Oh, no, I won’t. If by some chance you actually agree, stop and think for a moment until you realize what is so very, grievously wrong with what Chivers is saying here.

For the rest of us … well, first off, “Da Vinci” does not read as “of Vinci” in English. And we’re reading English here; and English can (and frequently does) go and appropriate any string of symbols it wants to refer to anything it wants, regardless of whether that string of symbols would make sense if it was transliterated. A brief search of Google or Amazon will reveal just how many people use that brief two-word string which now distinctively identifies that man. Your brain is designed to understand “The Da Vinci Code” as referring to the context of Leonardo Da Vinci. Get over it.

But more importantly, most of the rest of us can immediately recognize why “The Da Vinci Code” sent Dan Brown laughing all the way to the bank: >it sounds really cool.

-the Centaur
P.S. In a violation of my usual style, I am not going to go obsessively read Leonardo da Vinci’s Wikipedia page or dig through my mammoth library. I’m just going to let the essay speak for itself … and if I’m wrong in some details, I’m wrong.

I just learned a depressing thing

Sunday, September 13th, 2009

warren ellis

I apparently started writing before Warren Ellis did. The bastard’s only one year older than me, and his bibliography warrants its own Wikipedia page, whereas I have one (1) published short story.

Yes, yes, I know, I was busy getting a Ph.D. in Artificial Intelligence while Warren Ellis was pulling his fingernails out trying to climb the walls of the unholy well that is Marvel Comics. I don’t care. I see this as just another sign that his insane writing skills are a result of a deal with Cthulhu or the Devil.

I mean to track this walking abomination down, pin him to the wall, and get him to confess what deal he made, with whom, and whether it’s still open. I mean, my soul is not for sale, but we’re just talking some temp contract work for tentacular star-spawn in exchange for the preternatural ability to sway the minds of men with the written word, hey, maybe we can work something out.

-the Centaur
P.S. Actually, Mr. Ellis, I have no intention of tracking you down. First off, as a Christian I can’t do any soultrading; second, I’m afraid if I actually met you it would be too much like Death meeting Alan Moore.

Saga of the Nameless One

Friday, September 11th, 2009

Cthulhu was never so cute, but then he didn’t have the help of the Laugh-Out-Loud Cats. I for one welcome our nameless overlords.