As Spock says: it’s 2am, but if it was an hour earlier I’d have done another whole sketch before rendering. The side to side tilt is right, but I’ve leaned his head way down from what it is, making his face look bashed in. This is sort of the opposite problem from what I was having earlier, so … yay?
One of the things about learning is that regular, immediate feedback is important for progress. That’s why, when I have reference material for what I’m drawing, that I post both of those here so I can compare and judge what I’ve done, looking for things to improve.
Drawing every day.